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December Update (Genesis, website)12/9/2016 This second update is purely about Genesis. Where the story was, is, and will be headed. A couple days ago I re-read Genesis. This time not as Erick the writer but as Erick the reader. Turns out the story isn’t half bad, it’s actually quite enjoyable. I now understand why you all keep coming back. Trust me before this I wondered, why did people like this story. I will do a review of my story… Huh. I’m hella conceited.
Book 1 It was a jumbled, incoherent at part, however, it created a vision of the possibilities of this story. Book 1 set up John/Veritas as basically the ultimate badass. Which, when I read I’m like good job Erick :^). Of course it wasn’t perfect some parts could have been tighter, a lot of grammatical error. Some parts I got so excited to write I skipped a couple of words. Overall thought, this felt like a trailer to a movie. This made me happy for the next part. Book 2 This in my opinion is the first act. In which, unlike the first book that had Veritas just frolicking around he stayed in a spot. Characters were actually developed and for the most part were likeable. They were some grammatical error with in some spots the story becoming slightly jumbles. However, for the most part it was very tight, concise and easy to follow. Everything had a great flow to it. Also, there was more description. Alsèf, wasn’t well portrayed. Rèv feels more vivid in my mind. Although, slower overall it was better written. Book 3 This is the second act. In my mind the longest book. This alone will probably be double Book 1 and 2. There will be massive adventures. Here is where Veritas will expand upon his powers. Start to become this force of nature which every single adventurer will respect. This book should be fun to write and hopefully just as fun for you all to read. Also, this will delve deeper into John. Why his family have a strained relationship with Halabeoji. Book 4 The Final act. Basically every quests will be done. All questions answered. A final battle. The grand conclusion. Every loose end tied. And our Main Character takes his seat as the Emperor. After Genesis… I don’t know about any other stories. Anyway, I’ll have plenty of time considering my writing pace. The 4 book thing may change. If book 3 drags on to long I may split it. As always everything is a work in progress. -------------------- About the website. There is a poll for the game day/night and what week would be best. Depending on how many show interest. This may become something done on a semi-regular basis. The times set are relative to me, I live in Florida. CIick this link (HERE) to figure when that is for you. If you sincerely interested in the sent us an e-mail via contact us so we can get a general idea of how many people are coming. Title it (Runescape). In addition, if you have signed up for a newsletter and are not receiving any e-mail. Resubmit your e-mail again, or hit the contact us. Anyway this will probably the last update for this year. Enjoy the holidays, be safe. If you have any questions as always ask. Erick Jean :)
Chad
12/27/2016 12:58:49 am
I'll join in on gaming although it varies what times I'm available so just schedule it and I'll try to make it Comments are closed.
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